Senryu #488

Senryu # 488

 

 

judgmental beings

kryptonite for those of prayer

souls fly towards clouds

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/7/24

Reviews

[Desert Knave]

Hard to find many that pray that are not every bit as judgmental ... but maybe I've just ran into the wrong folks. Nice write. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes it is, Jim...I run into the same people.
j.

[John Sullivan]

I'm not terribly religious, but I do believe in the soul, and may it fly ever upward! Wonderful little piece, Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, John,
j.

[Andrew John]

Green kryptonite or red kryptonite? Does it take a superman, or Superman, to make a judgement? Nice thought, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice response, Andrew.
thank you,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

So many are quick to pass judgement on others. Kryptonite makes me think of Superman and how this substance weakened him. Made him vulnerable. I can read this senryu in different ways. People who pray can also be judgemental. That’s why I don’t attend church anymore. When souls fly toward clouds, I am not thinking of happy endings. I am not thinking of silver linings. I am thinking that cloud looks like trouble. I am also pondering on what comes next. So much to consider here j.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for considering, Chris.
j.