a school of angry whales

a school of angry whales

gutted emotions

mutiny of feelings

the captain's calm

is truant

the heart is capsizing

while downsizing

one of the lifeboats

is missing.

erin-cilberto

12/27/23

Reviews

[living lavender]

this was a fun read. loved the story told.
{emotions between the lines.}

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, lavender,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

This spoke to me of the Titanic, the victims, the missing or not enough boats, the mistakes made; any time we drown, we go down.
Powerful sir Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir J.

[willweb]

Less is more is not always a good thing and especially if it is something you really need though, we don't ever figure that part out until we really need it. Not sure if I got your meaning correctly, but that is how it spoke to me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your interpretation, will...
thank you,
j.