senryu #644

senryu #644

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

senryu #644

 

 

 

 

blond wisp of a girl

lying on turned maple leaf

autumn's endeavor

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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Quite intrigued by this write, This is very well put

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Meg.
j.
A turning of a new leaf, a new beginning perhaps.

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

Thank you, andrew,
j.
Enchanting words as images come to mind of blowing leaves along the road ;-] Simple little words that bring so much to my mind.

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

Thank you, willow,
j.
Maple leaves in autumn surely create spectacular imagery and must bring reminders of people and places much loved. Your Vermont came to mind here J.

Beautiful.

Chris

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

You know me too well...that is my place.
j.
Nature is such a deft, imaginative and beautiful artist. And so is your pen, dear jacob.

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

thank you, Divya,
j.
A real little beauty
Having done 644 is a huge contribution

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

Thank you, Dave,
j.
Seasons are best flavoured with humane company, I hope you had a good Autumn, author Jacob.

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

Thank you, Stu...
Autumn is the best season, always.
j.

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Added on December 1, 2023
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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



About
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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