senryu #644
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
senryu
#644
blond
wisp of a girl
lying
on turned maple leaf
autumn's
endeavor
© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
Quite intrigued by this write, This is very well put
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you, Meg.
j.
A turning of a new leaf, a new beginning perhaps.
Posted 12 Months Ago
A turning of a new leaf, a new beginning perhaps.
12 Months Ago
Thank you, andrew,
j.
Enchanting words as images come to mind of blowing leaves along the road ;-] Simple little words that bring so much to my mind.
Posted 12 Months Ago
Enchanting words as images come to mind of blowing leaves along the road ;-] Simple little words that bring so much to my mind.
12 Months Ago
Thank you, willow,
j.
Maple leaves in autumn surely create spectacular imagery and must bring reminders of people and places much loved. Your Vermont came to mind here J.
Beautiful.
Chris
Posted 12 Months Ago
Maple leaves in autumn surely create spectacular imagery and must bring reminders of people and places much loved. Your Vermont came to mind here J.
Beautiful.
Chris
12 Months Ago
You know me too well...that is my place.
j.
Nature is such a deft, imaginative and beautiful artist. And so is your pen, dear jacob.
Posted 12 Months Ago
Nature is such a deft, imaginative and beautiful artist. And so is your pen, dear jacob.
12 Months Ago
thank you, Divya,
j.
A real little beauty
Having done 644 is a huge contribution
Posted 12 Months Ago
A real little beauty
Having done 644 is a huge contribution
12 Months Ago
Thank you, Dave,
j.
Seasons are best flavoured with humane company, I hope you had a good Autumn, author Jacob.
Posted 12 Months Ago
Seasons are best flavoured with humane company, I hope you had a good Autumn, author Jacob.
12 Months Ago
Thank you, Stu...
Autumn is the best season, always.
j.
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Added on December 1, 2023
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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