Senryu # 641

Senryu # 641

 

 

 

 

I offer my love

the collection plate heavy

my heart a feather

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/19/23

Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

There's no doubt it'd be heavy. After all, what is poured out to be weighted is the inner motions of your heart, for a poet to carry a library or a pantheon in their heart is nothing out of the norm. And for yourself personally, author Jacob, I can say for sure that I know that the collection of poems and vibrant color dyes you keep in your heart would undoubtedly be weighted in tons, for only such unit may hope to measure the mass of your creativity.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Stu...kind review.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful write.
Loved it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Julie,
j.

[Desert Knave]

Wow. Not sure what to say here. Very open to interpretation, and to me the author underestimates the weight of his love. Nicely done. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Maybe he does just that...thank you, Jim,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful senryu J. Hearts and feathers are a gift, so spiritual. No money needed, Love is everything. Money is a curse most of the time.

Money can’t buy me love sing the Fab 4.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, no money...it breaks up more relationships...
"I don't care too much for money..."
Poetry...yes.