senryu #639

senryu #639

 

 

 

a redo redone

scattered thoughts comply, align

form perfect nonsense

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/18/23

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Perfect nonsense....ah, yes, I am quite familiar with that commodity! Scattered thoughts often create the most wonderful poetry....as you have shown us here. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think my poetry is all an accident...
thank you, Lydi,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

A serendipitous one!

[W. Barrett Munn]

you have described my every day, except for align and perfect

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think imperfection is perfection.
j.

[AYVID N]

I love redoing my already done. Its such a satisfying timepass. I'm so happy to relate to this clever senryu, dear Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am glad you could, Divya,
thank you,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Haha. I can't redo my nonsense. You are lucky. Nice one J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha...I should redo me.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I like that a redo redone

I never redo most of mine I suppose I should but I don’t have the patience

Love it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I revise as I write them, but once they are out...I leave them and move on.
I am seldom a reviser..
j.