senryu # 638

senryu # 638

 

 

immaculate roads

I have a journeyman's wit

and a map of poems

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/18/23

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

"a map of poems"....and all roads lead where, Jacob? :) A reliable witty man is welcome to walk on my roads...immaculate or otherwise. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am so lost...I don't think the map was legitimate...someone just made it up.
thank you, Lydi,
j.

[light and ashes]

very nice, I like........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Light,
j.

[Starbaby]

Those 2 things will get you anywhere you want to go. May the journey be a good one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Starbaby,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Yes… you do… I see a Map in your eyes. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

And that's the treasure. A map of poems a treasury of thoughts

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, andrew,
j.

[AYVID N]

That must make the journey truly worth it. Wit and poetry are both blessings. Not all are so lucky.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I feel pretty lucky to get to do this poetry thing.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

A map of poems
Well said !
I bet you have a cupboard filled with them all

Loved it 😍

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and one day the cupboard will be bare, I am sure.
thank you, Julie,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Maybe But your work will live on. I believe

[M]

This speaks to me of life experience. Immaculate roads travelled many times over and guided always by that trusty map of poems. When those poems come from the heart, the destined roads are easily found. If this is truly senryu #638, then I’ll quit before I begin!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah, just a random number...I don't really know how many I have written...I write poems and then move on to the next ones...
Thank you for your kind review.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Immaculate roads sounds inviting to me. Too many pot holes can cause major problems and stop the journey altogether. A map of poems can lead the way to a literary adventure. Your poems are an adventure for your readers.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Chris,
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your craft fine tunes itself with every poem you post. It's truly something to behold!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Kelly...
j.