senryu # 638

senryu # 638

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

senryu # 638

 

 

immaculate roads

I have a journeyman's wit

and a map of poems

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/18/23

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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"a map of poems"....and all roads lead where, Jacob? :) A reliable witty man is welcome to walk on my roads...immaculate or otherwise. Lydi**

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

I am so lost...I don't think the map was legitimate...someone just made it up.
thank you, Lyd.. read more
very nice, I like........

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Light,
j.
Those 2 things will get you anywhere you want to go. May the journey be a good one.

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Starbaby,
j.
Yes… you do… I see a Map in your eyes. gently, Pat

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

thank you, Pat,
j.
And that's the treasure. A map of poems a treasury of thoughts

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

Thank you, andrew,
j.
That must make the journey truly worth it. Wit and poetry are both blessings. Not all are so lucky.

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

I feel pretty lucky to get to do this poetry thing.
j.
A map of poems
Well said !
I bet you have a cupboard filled with them all

Loved it 😍


Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

and one day the cupboard will be bare, I am sure.
thank you, Julie,
j.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

11 Months Ago

Maybe But your work will live on. I believe
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This speaks to me of life experience. Immaculate roads travelled many times over and guided always by that trusty map of poems. When those poems come from the heart, the destined roads are easily found. If this is truly senryu #638, then I’ll quit before I begin!

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

ah, just a random number...I don't really know how many I have written...I write poems and then move.. read more
Immaculate roads sounds inviting to me. Too many pot holes can cause major problems and stop the journey altogether. A map of poems can lead the way to a literary adventure. Your poems are an adventure for your readers.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Chris,
j.
Your craft fine tunes itself with every poem you post. It's truly something to behold!

Posted 11 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Kelly...
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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