senryu # 637

senryu # 637

she is defrosting

encircled in my embrace

we wait for nightfall

erin-cilberto

11/18/23

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

When some people hug, they transport a person to a wonderfully peaceful place. This hug hints at a passionate evening in store. Good one. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and we wonder when that store might open...thanks, Lydi.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Touch is healing
It’s not always erotic
They say people that touch daily hug kiss hold hands shake hands live longer than those isolated
It warms the heart
Love the write Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Wow, maybe I will live to 100 then...thank you, Julie,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Wow you must be getting more hugs than me lol

[AYVID N]

A truly beautiful thought. Defrosting is such a beautiful word for a warming heart. I could feel the joy. Loved this senryu!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Divya,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Warming signs of Fireworks…. Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thanks Pat..Bless you.
j.

[Ken Simm.]

Ah so soft and beautiful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Ken.
j.

[M]

A warm, loving embrace will always thaw the ice cold heart. Sometimes it’s all we need. Just a little display of affection to let us know we are wanted and needed. Nightfall would soon become a blazing fire of passion. Excellent senryu.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Makhabat.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

The ice is melting. This senryu speaks to me of warmth and future possibilities. Embraces are romantic. Turn up the heat J, winter is cold. Lovely senryu.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...

[John the Baptist]

It sounds as though what will be will be, and it probably won't wait for nightfall.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I had that single by Doris Day....long time ago...Que Sera!

[Starbaby]

Your romantic is peeking out dear Poet. Love the anticipation for nightfall.( Alternatively, you could always put on some mood music and opt for a nooner) ;-).

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Mood music? How about Back in Black by AC/DC?

[Stu. T.H.]

Defrosting, as in warming up, finally one has returned the affection of the other. And the two join in an embrace before night comes and they learn of what to do next.

A short, romantic and comforting senryu.
Thank you for sharing your work, author Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Stu,
j.