Icy Trig

Icy Trig

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Icy Trig

 

 

a lover's triangle

never divides well

 

always a remainder

that is an unhappy quotient.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/26/23

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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Indeed, one was bound to be left out. It's just the way love is. A triangle is unbalanced. I loved the brevity here, dear Jacob.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Divya,
j.
Jacob - so perceptive and oh so true.. I know, I know too well.

Take care - Dave

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

yes, they are not fun,
Thank you, Dave,
j.
ingenious wisdom, Jacob, for sure and certain ... Love it!

Marve

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Marve,
j.
Oh this is a little marvel J. A mathematical problem posed here. Yep, two’s company, three’s a crowd. Definitely an icy problem for one of them. Frozen out. Top notch brevity. So cleverly worded. Liking very much the one you penned yesterday and this one today too. So bloomin witty.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

I like your response better than the poem itself.
thanks, Chris,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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