autopilot desk jocky

autopilot desk jocky

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

autopilot desk jocky

 

 

wrote a poem this morning

using AI

 

it erred

which is human

but would not let me auto-correct

 

which is not.

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/3/23

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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Ah, yes. It can happennnnn

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

ha ha, thanks, Andrew,
j.
If we smile and "dial" it may respond with a sound of music...
even a Collie will respond if a touch of warmth is applied. A seeing-eye Dog is more productive than nuts and bolts. I will "vote" for Canine Intelligence. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

anything is more productive than nuts and bolts.
thank you,
j.
Perhaps it is showing us that real creativity can't be left to the artificial. True creativity must come from the heart, the soul.
Take care - Dave

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Yes, it must come from the heart...
thank you, Dave,
j.
It may very well understand what the words broken hearted mean Jacob, but it's not the same when you picture the pain of a hammer bouncing off a circuit board!
Never trust such a superior intellect, when all it would take to erase everything it has ever known, is a spilled coffee 😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Spilled coffee will ruin the keyboard...or the circuit board...yes.
j.
If AI wrote it you’re lucky it didn’t autocorrect you with an “I’ll be back.”

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

I would be terminated for sure.
j.
W. Barrett Munn

1 Year Ago

Good one, J.
AI, can put words together,
but it can not convey real human soul,
but what is so scary is that so many people these days, do not know the difference.

These kids today, millennials and generation z, they know nothing of soul.. most of them anyway. I am sure there is a very minimal portion of them that do, I figure they would have to be,
but they are growing up. One day they will be the adults running this land,
and that, is a scary thought.

Great thoughts.


Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

I am afraid your insights are pretty spot on, LIght.
j.
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

I'm not surprised.
It's nothing to be ashamed of.
We all that is the case.
Are we witnessing the downfall of human thought. AI can write ... I suppose ... but does it feel?



Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

It pretends to feel...but that is like the new lead singer of Journey singing those songs that Steve.. read more
Jacob,

This is a wonderfully clever and witty write that speaks all too true of type of A.I. we are forced to deal with all too often ...

Marve

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Marve,
j.
it erred

which is human

but would not let me auto-correct

Beautiful lines. AI is making our brain dead I think.vgood poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Arundass...
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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