Colors of After

Colors of After

 

 

placid pose

a sort of smile

cheeks blushed with thoughts 

of a lover

yesterday's encounter

today's reconnoiter 

 

she sips her coffee

turns a little bit more to the right

the artist brushes her onto his canvass

 

was he the one?

 

 

 

9/1/23

Reviews

[Lorry]

This truly feels like what an artist would hope for in his audience Jacob, a swirling of thoughts and ideas reaching out from the canvas and bringing the story of his images to life.
At least that is what I think, a guy who couldn't paint a door without a YouTube instruction video. 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I can't paint a wall...a plain wall...so I am with you on that, Lorry,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice scene create by the wonderful poetry. The mind of a model. Is ever-moving. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Jacob,

a very mysteriously invigorating write ...

Marve

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind comment, Marve,
j.

[Patricia]

this is absolutely striking! This has so much emotion and is full of soul. I love this piece, very very impressive! makes one flutter through their history in comparison, love when poetry does that to me. Wow!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

appreciate you Patricia,
hope you are well,
j.

[Soren]

As always your words are poetic and this time so gentle. I too wonder "was he the one?"

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I still wonder as well.
thank you, Soren,
j.