Colors of After

Colors of After

 

 

placid pose

a sort of smile

cheeks blushed with thoughts 

of a lover

yesterday's encounter

today's reconnoiter 

 

she sips her coffee

turns a little bit more to the right

the artist brushes her onto his canvass

 

was he the one?

 

 

 

9/1/23

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Those brush strokes of wonder , beauty...was she the right one ....🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you so much,
j.

[Andrew John]

Nice move. Yes, I like this one, J. Colourful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Andrew,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love any poem with brush strokes or paintings or artists
Loved this one was very instantly drawn to it ! Excuse my dumb pun

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Julie,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Not the one; sadly not the hun.
This says much in the few. I hope at least he kept the painting; might be worth something of value.
Excellent brevity.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I hope he did too, Sami...I hope he did, too...
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

Being an Artist of the "After Glow" ... cheeks blushed with thoughts of yesterday's encounter... reminds me of the Movie "Love in the Afternoon" with Gary Cooper and Audrey Hepburn... a Classic Romance. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ah, two of my favorite actors...he is actually my favorite male actor..."well I think that's just dandy"---

[kefirmain]

Good poetry with interesting aesthetic expression. dinosaur game

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind comment, kefirmain,
j.

[Stella Armour]

possibly, but somehow i think not ....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am leaning in the same direction, Stella.
Thank you,
j.

[Keagen Cole]

I like how you present the poem as an open-ended story. The allegories sewn into this are also intriguing, with the short yet detailed description of the persons & events. Maybe he was the one. That's what I like to think, anyway. ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your insightful words, Keagen.
j.

[Keagen Cole]

Anytime. ;3

[Arundass TP]

Interesting artistic expression through linesm good poem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind comment, Arundass,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Was he the one?

The colours of after are looking pretty rosy J. I can picture a scenario of two here brought together again.

the artist brushes her onto his canvass - what a perfect line that is. Beautiful brevity.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris.
Ah, happy ending? if only, for them, whoever the them be.