senryu

senryu

 

 

 

 

catastrophe looms

simulated in cloud bursts

raining orange drops

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/8/23

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful write for a tragedy
Well done J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

A Canadian Dreamcycle

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Winston.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob…. Sky burns color of
Orange blossom honey… we may have Fire Crackers for the Fourth of July… our Flag is still there…. (Your Senryu is timely). Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat,
j.

[Miss Sharon]

A very nice senryu Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Sharon,
j.