sweet dreams

sweet dreams

 

 

 

 

orange haze sweeps in

city cleared of street people

beggars breathe like us

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/7/23

Reviews

[duff]

No matter the amount of Vitamin D it cant be ignored. You can't gloss over it. Stunning work Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, duff,
j.

[Miss Sharon]

Nice to see you writing in some of the form poetry Jacob. I like! ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sharon...I was feeling dry, and one of my methods of getting out of a writing drought is to go haiku or senryu...I don't feel I am very good at them...but they break the ice and I am grateful for your nice comment.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Street Cars named Desire … Movies cannot terrorize like Real Life Fires… Amen .. Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat...so true.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Yes so I hope they shelter the homeless
Stay safe
Good write here

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there has to be shelter...has to be.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes is it still bad there
It looks terrible

[Lorry]

I hadn't even thought of those poor homeless people in such a situation as you're going through now. I hope they were all rounded up to safety.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, otherwise, how do they protect themselves?
thank you, Lorry

[Chris Shaw]

Pity the street people aren’t looked after all the time. It takes a catastrophe to consider them.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and that is so sad.
thank you, Chris,
j.