Promises

Promises

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Promises


she was so Bull Shoals
in step,
accent
lazy eye worked hard to love

we were in harmony
near the beer cooler
of the restaurant as we sang
America songs

and wondered if life had more to offer
than waiting tables
and cooking pizzas
winking at the meshing of our voices

A Carly/James thing
only we thought better
than they
but we had no vinyl reassurance

just a "B" side friendship blended our voices closer
you are no longer in step with life
and I sing alone, now
but that cooler is imprinted in my memory

as if I were a mug
sitting upon your tray

"I need you"


erin-cilberto
6/3/23

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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The hope of youth Jacob. On a skip and a dance. We hope for everything. And sometimes we get little. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Coyote,
j.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Jacob.
Promises. ‘We were in harmony’. Now that is a wonderful place to be. Sounds like a special friendship with a work colleague where there was a particular close bond.

‘I need you’ , now isn’t that a Beatles song?

She is missed and I believe no longer on this plane. Beautiful poem J. Especially your final line. Touched me.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thanks Chris...and yes, The Beatles had a song on their "Help" soundtrack called "I need you"
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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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