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A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


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abide

abide

abide

expire

expire 

expire

 

alone with

alone with

alone with

 

thoughts unwritten

unwritten

un

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/26/23

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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Hellos, Dear, Jacob-Erin-Cilberto,
good morning, I find it just perfect,
I like the thought of unwritten words, and how we have them stored in out minds.
I figure, I want to write, but the occasion isn't there.
It gives me much dismay,
Love it,
-----1809 Back Plague December

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind review, Black Plague,
j.
1809 Black Plague December

1 Year Ago

you are most welcome, dear,
God, I do love brevity. The last stanza describes perfectly the descent of a block.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, John,
j.
Life, death and the in between. Filling in the in between.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

and in and in and in...
thank you, Fabian,
j.
when used by a master, repetition can be so damn powerful. a great deal buried within this gem J. life, hope and expectancy, all hidden within the husk of mortality

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind words, Ken,
j.
This speaks to me as if you are in a dying state and sort of muttering to yourself, non compas mentis state of not knowing if you are alone or there is somebody with you; you have some awareness that you have not finished your writing….and then…..unknowing…….
This a bit different kind of writing for you……powerful and excellent
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Betty...I don't think Plath was finished with her writing either...her death was like a p.. read more
unrealized
And
unaware


Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you so much, Cherrie,
j.
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Abide is one of my favorite words. It resonates peace and silent strength.
Now that I am reading this again, it occurs to be that this is, in fact, an echo. or at least a residual echo.
Fantasic. You have done some really great work here.
How do you do it?? Really? How?........................


Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Humility is a good thing.
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

You are so very welcome, jacob..and to what you have said..Arent we all?
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

You are so very welcome, jacob..and to what you have said..
Arent we all?
I do believe that "a" was a good place to start if you writing this alphabetically, which it is from what I see but ending on an "un", well...it depends on what you are un-doing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Oh yes, it does depend doesn't it?
thanks, will,
j.
Great stuff..very experimental in nature and bold to write. I think it was well worth it. What a cool write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Light...
j.
At first, I was utterly confused about the formatting, but I finally managed to interpret it. Short, yet impactful. Acute, yet endless. It's probably the most original poem I've read yet. ;3

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Keagen,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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