a

a

 

 

 

abide

abide

abide

expire

expire 

expire

 

alone with

alone with

alone with

 

thoughts unwritten

unwritten

un

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/26/23

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Dear, Jacob-Erin-Cilberto,
good morning, I find it just perfect,
I like the thought of unwritten words, and how we have them stored in out minds.
I figure, I want to write, but the occasion isn't there.
It gives me much dismay,
Love it,
-----1809 Back Plague December

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Black Plague,
j.

[1809 Black Plague December]

you are most welcome, dear,

[John the Baptist]

God, I do love brevity. The last stanza describes perfectly the descent of a block.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[FGFRANKLIN]

Life, death and the in between. Filling in the in between.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and in and in and in...
thank you, Fabian,
j.

[Ken e Bujold]

when used by a master, repetition can be so damn powerful. a great deal buried within this gem J. life, hope and expectancy, all hidden within the husk of mortality

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Ken,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

This speaks to me as if you are in a dying state and sort of muttering to yourself, non compas mentis state of not knowing if you are alone or there is somebody with you; you have some awareness that you have not finished your writing….and then…..unknowing…….
This a bit different kind of writing for you……powerful and excellent
Best, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Betty...I don't think Plath was finished with her writing either...her death was like a phone off the hook, as Sexton put it.
j.

[Cherrie]

unrealized
And
unaware

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you so much, Cherrie,
j.

[Cherrie]

Abide is one of my favorite words. It resonates peace and silent strength.

[light and ashes]

Now that I am reading this again, it occurs to be that this is, in fact, an echo. or at least a residual echo.
Fantasic. You have done some really great work here.
How do you do it?? Really? How?........................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Light...I am really just a conduit...don't think I can take real credit for anything that comes out of me.
j.

[light and ashes]

Humility is a good thing.

[light and ashes]

You are so very welcome, jacob..and to what you have said..Arent we all?

[light and ashes]

You are so very welcome, jacob..and to what you have said..
Arent we all?

[willweb]

I do believe that "a" was a good place to start if you writing this alphabetically, which it is from what I see but ending on an "un", well...it depends on what you are un-doing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh yes, it does depend doesn't it?
thanks, will,
j.

[light and ashes]

Great stuff..very experimental in nature and bold to write. I think it was well worth it. What a cool write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Light...
j.

[Keagen Cole]

At first, I was utterly confused about the formatting, but I finally managed to interpret it. Short, yet impactful. Acute, yet endless. It's probably the most original poem I've read yet. ;3

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Keagen,
j.