Hellos, Dear, Jacob-Erin-Cilberto,
good morning, I find it just perfect,
I like the thought of unwritten words, and how we have them stored in out minds.
I figure, I want to write, but the occasion isn't there.
It gives me much dismay,
Love it,
-----1809 Back Plague December
when used by a master, repetition can be so damn powerful. a great deal buried within this gem J. life, hope and expectancy, all hidden within the husk of mortality
This speaks to me as if you are in a dying state and sort of muttering to yourself, non compas mentis state of not knowing if you are alone or there is somebody with you; you have some awareness that you have not finished your writing….and then…..unknowing…….
This a bit different kind of writing for you……powerful and excellent
Best, B
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
thank you, Betty...I don't think Plath was finished with her writing either...her death was like a p.. read morethank you, Betty...I don't think Plath was finished with her writing either...her death was like a phone off the hook, as Sexton put it.
j.
Now that I am reading this again, it occurs to be that this is, in fact, an echo. or at least a residual echo.
Fantasic. You have done some really great work here.
How do you do it?? Really? How?........................
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
thank you, Light...I am really just a conduit...don't think I can take real credit for anything that.. read morethank you, Light...I am really just a conduit...don't think I can take real credit for anything that comes out of me.
j.
I do believe that "a" was a good place to start if you writing this alphabetically, which it is from what I see but ending on an "un", well...it depends on what you are un-doing.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Oh yes, it does depend doesn't it?
thanks, will,
j.
At first, I was utterly confused about the formatting, but I finally managed to interpret it. Short, yet impactful. Acute, yet endless. It's probably the most original poem I've read yet. ;3
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..