4 senryu bitten by cliché

4 senryu bitten by cliché 

imagination

is a dead weed shriveled up

where thoughts go to die

a poem is a poem

when the words anticipate

where meanings survive

themes are imminent

in fields of creative sway

we bend with such ease

natural poet

turns ugly to beautiful 

stored in memory

erin-cilberto

4/14/23

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

4 very profound senryus Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dale,
j.

[red93]

Really Excellent Jacob and I like the wry smile with which they are delivered ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Tony,
j.

[AYVID N]

Dear Jacob,
Each senryu has something so unique to offer by way of thought poetry and creativity. Loved them all. You rarely write in form so this was such a treat. Thanks! Loved it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I slip every once in awhile...
thank you, divya,
j.

[AYVID N]

Oh I think you should... We are all here waiting for those lovely moments.