tying the knots

This one is for Chris S.

tying the knots

 

 

 

the marina is still tonight

a few ripples,

sides of boats banging softly against the docks

of eternity

 

there is rhythm to the peace

the aroma of plates filled with delicacies 

because anything consumed rocking on the water

is gourmet

to those who love the sea

 

the salty smell of relaxation

the intensity of the sky

and what is free

 

the nights produce a display of stars

a gift of the moon

shadow dancing

with the planets

 

the marina is still tonight

the ripples cease

the boat rests

 

we endure restful sleep

like we are not used to

 

wishing we could sail into eternity

on this dream.

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/31/23

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too Jacob. I need the sea.
"there is rhythm to the peace
the aroma of plates filled with delicacies
because anything consumed rocking on the water
is gourmet"
The above lines. I wish to know again. I need to hear the rhythm of the sea again. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
to those who love the sea

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, my friend,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Ayvid N]

the marina is still tonight
a few ripples,
sides of boats banging softly against the docks
of eternity

Oh what a beautiful picture you painted here, dear Jacob. This poem is truly different from all others of yours but equally beautiful. The Marina is so still and so dreamy only the shadows dance till eternity. Also, a big thanks to dear Chris for sharing the pictures that inspired these amazing words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, divya...yes, the pics were beautiful.

[Ayvid N]

The words say that, indeed.
You're most welcome, dear Jacob.

[red93]

Excellent Work Jacob - you reminded me of the idyllic French Harbours of my youthful voyages in Continental Europe ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, red..glad it could conjure up an image of something good for you.

[willweb]

Not sure but I believe you have just described absolute serenity and peacefulness. This may just be the perfect evening in ink.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, will,
j.

[Weeping willow]

Sounds of the sea is always beautiful to me, lovely write ;-}

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, willow.
j.

[FGFRANKLIN]

This sounds so lovely. I love the feeling of being out on the water. I enjoyed the write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Fabian....I didn't do much here, Chris sent my pictures that inspired the words, they pretty much wrote themselves...but then mine usually do.

[FGFRANKLIN]

A writer is merely a conduit for inspiration to flow through. You may quote me. ;)

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is beautiful, Jacob. I can see the moon reflected in the water, the stars in the eyes of those who love the sea. This sails into the soul on waves as calm as breath.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Linda Marie.
j.

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

those opening stanzas were just amazing......the ending was spot on....I believe that this certainly is one of your best works and that is saying a lot because you have such a rich and diverse catalogue. Masterfully done by the master himself!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, Jerome,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jacob.

Your lines here have created beautiful imagery and a sense of utter calm. That’s what I get from my time in the marina. I love your final line. Sailing into eternity on this dream. That would certainly be the way to go. This one is a treasure my friend.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the inspiration for this, Chris.
and your kind words.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You made such an ace job of this marina poem which isn’t where your muse normally takes you, I think I’ll send some more pics:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob… resting in the rocking of gentle waves…. Sleep is deep as Stars smile and Venus becomes bright as Diamonds dancing through the Night. quietly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Pat,
j.