equilibrium

equilibrium

 

 

a casual kiss

stirred the introvert

to lean against parameters

 

of imbalanced risk.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/24/23

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

You mean the introvert overcame the fear of rejection? Obviously the kiss was not so casual to them. Parameters are what hold us up. Interesting thoughts = good poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Bill,
j.

[Louisa Chan]

Being thrown out of equilibrium into a state of imbalance.
A short but potent poem leaving a deep impression!
Louisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Louisa.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes kisses can be risky. Especially the first ones on offer. Will they lead to heaven or hell? Only time will tell. Nothing tried, nothing gained. Weigh it up and make the choice. Great brevity J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[AYVID N]

Perhaps, the kiss had the power to sway. Life is like that. Triggers happen. People change. We do things we never expected of us. Attraction can make sane people mad. Sedate office goers turn poets.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, never expected...thank you, divya,
j.

[AYVID N]

You're most welcome.

[andrew mitchell]

It is a fine balance and if you don’t take the risk, you know the saying Nice guys come last! For there is always a bolder person than you that will take over, stuff up the equilibrium, leave the carnage and move on. Love the brevity.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew...yes, always a bolder person.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It's a balancing act. "Lookin' back in front of me in the mirror's a grin
Through eyes of love I see I'm really lookin' at a friend
We've all had our problems that's the way life is
My heart goes out to others who are there to make amends
We've been walkin' the tightrope tryin' to make it right
Walkin' the tightrope every day and every night" Stevie Ray Vaughan

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, some actually are, aren't they?
thank you, Fabian,
j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Sanity is only a state of mind.

[Soren]

This one says it all. Very clever and well written.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Soren,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Oh yes. Those kisses Jacob. Kisses are rewards given to us by kind women. I did like you described the casual kiss. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for joining me for my morning cup of coffee...well, if I drank that stuff..

[Coyote Poetry]

Good evening Jacob and you are welcome.