Click

Click

 

 

taken several years ago

Pendleton clash

with October painting

 

a yard of foliage

overlooking a chilled pond

she was dashing

 

movie star sway

her eyes forever captured

within the colors

 

of the Kodachrome slide

journeying into the future

preserving the moment

 

as another leaf

floated to the ground

behind her.

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/10/23

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Marvelous as it can be described. Kodak moments described perfectly and appreciably. A dashing beauty, forever captured and preserved in the poet's mind, heart and archive.
Whoeeeee

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pretty much looked like an actress back then.
thank you, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! You are welcome sir Jacob.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this so much Jacob
My father worked at Kodak for years
He got cheap film and yes took millions of pics and slides too over the years

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the slides had such sharp color...
thank you, Julie,
j.

[Lorry]

A perfect description of the moment a memory was captured, leaving you with the picture as future proof of the moment it was taken.
Sounds like it is already imprinted within you, but I bet it is well checked, just to confirm the details of the mind have kept their side of the bargain 😊

[Lorry]

***Not part of the review, but site has been going wonky again and won't let me post or even change the "what's on your mind" bit.
I'll keep reviewing if it let's me and hope it all sorts itself out soon.

[Chris Shaw]

A moment in time captured forever. And what a moment that was. Second stanza sets the autumn scene. The season you love most. I see painting and photograph close together. Her eyes captured forever. You are on a nostalgia trip dear J. Lovely poetry.

[AYVID N]

Dear Jacob,

This is such a beautiful painting of a moment captured in a camera. What a click that must have been! I wish I could see that picture once.. You are such an amazing poet.