secret

secret

 

ravens with red wings

pastor's hands washed with holy water

the sparrow cries

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/20/23

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really love this poem Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dale,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Sent a shudder down my spine J. Those who were trusted abusing that trust and I feel sure it still continues. A darkness that is difficult to contemplate and so many victims.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, much darkness....
thank you, Chris,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Washing the poor birds for the slaughter later. Oh, how they abuse the faith and trust people put in them.
Will not be a bird of prey; will be an obedient servant to God alone.
Excellent, sir Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Jacob.

[Relic]

I'm sure a dove is crying as well. There have been too many secrets. It's tainted the wafers.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your understanding, Relic...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You left the reader with underlying thoughts. Each statement adding to the strong ending. Good evening Jacob and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.