writer

writer

 

 

poe i tree

ray vens perch

sun blackens

with the murder of crows

 

a black bird stretches

its pen

and writes

 

poe i tree

to a reader lying perfectly still

 

there might be a perceived heartbeat

but only in his mind.

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/7/23

Reviews

[red93]

Welcome Back Jacob. More Power to your Keyboard ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, red.
j.

[Daisy]

i love your poe i tree!
dl

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you daisy,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Welcome back
Like a bird on a wire
You never left
You were still here in spirit !
I hope you are feeling stronger
Take care x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie...

getting stronger

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Good
Take care
Good to see you here again

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome back sir Jacob. We all missed you. Got us worried about you.
As for the poem, I read that a poet will always think, contemplate and write about poetry, whether in his mind, with his or her pen, even if they are lying down for surgery. They will write till the last breath.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Jacob

[W. Barrett Munn]

Good to see you have reactivated-or is that reanimated, Dr. F.

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe a little of both, I imagine.
thanks Winston

[DIVYA]

Dear Jacob,
Came back to this poem once again...
I can feel the perceived heartbeat become stronger each day....
Looking forward to a new post from you soon, my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, divya...
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jacob... a Valentine Heart for you...
My Heart beats a symphony of Welcome Home.
tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat,
j.

[John the Baptist]

This is the second Poe connected poem I have reviewed tonight. I'm starting to hear something beating against my chamber door.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Good to hear from you, friend. Hope you're doing well now.

[willweb]

Birds of a feather and the tell-tale heartbeat.
Always something new to find here my friend.
Welcome to Jacob's Word Shop and Stanza Emporium, where everything has its place and meanings are twisted by special order.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thankk you, will,
j.