the looking glass

the looking glass

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


the looking glass

 

 

carbonated cab

bubbling exhaust fervor

fare sips scenery

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/27/22

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto


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Looking at the world from the inside. Reminds me of those chauffeured limousines where the alcohol is limitless.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

I remember those...thanks, andrew,
j.
bubbling exhaust fervor is quite a line as I picture not only a cab but the fervor of city streets filled with cabs and traffic.
Nice one, Jacob.

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your understanding words, Winston,
j.
Like a single still in a film. Interesting and allows minds to wander.
Happy New Year Jacob.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Ken....Happy New Year to you as well,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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