is the ending the end, or...

is the ending the end, or...

 

 

 

 

 

we apologize to the myth

of God

or maybe he really exists

and our penance

subjects us to less pain in the end

maybe the white light

will be little darker early on

then let us see our way

to the next level

 

like a free elevator rising to the top floor

then we might worry about falling off of heaven

 

wuthering heights

can be as scary as Hades....

 

and beware of the dog.

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/14/22

Reviews

[Fairy Khan]

Nobody actually knows and it's so horrifying and intriguing at the same time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is, Fairy, it is.
j.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Hail, Jacob, my Free Thinking friend and esteemed Poet! ... 'Tis true that the art of Free Thinking, open mindedness, and impartial objectivity is truly demonstrating itself for reals within each and every word of this majestic call for sobriety of the heart and mind for all Humanity ... Brave ...~

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Marvin,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Who knows what comes next dear J. None of us can be sure. I am not a fan of organised religion, but there again I can’t be sure there isn’t a heaven either.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we will find out sooner or later.
thanks, Chris,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Wuthering Heights … they walked into the Mist of a Kiss … where 🌈 Rainbows 🌈 survive…
Amen… be blessed… Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

rainbows survive...will we?
thank you, Pat,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob… I have noticed a Sugnifican disappearance of Rainbiws wgmhere I live in Virginia; however, I did see one the Soring/Summer of 2022 which gave me Hope. I do believe that 😈 has possessed our present Leaders… so to me if Prayer can destroy the Devil… we may have a Chance of Survival. Amen .. Believing in the Holy Spirit which resides to some degree when every Baby is Born and helps us fight Evil is our Hope. We do have Proof of Good winning over Evil. It is a difficult Task… but one of the Best Options. 🙏 praying… Pat

[Soren]

Cerberus is nothing to be scoffed at, even Hercules had his difficulties with him before subduing him. A very timely write for this season.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Soren,
j.

[AYVID N]

Such an imaginative poem on the afterlife.
The possibilities are infinite and we'll never really know.
Penance may help reduce the pain. Religion may just be just an anesthetic but I'm in all the way.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your understanding words, DIVYA,
j.

[AYVID N]

You're welcome my friend.

[andrew mitchell]

It’s funny our thoughts are kind of spiritual in the sense they are invisible but can be heard. So for me the end is the end so I’m going to crawl back into my agnostic dwelling, meditate and dream of a second place called beyond retirement.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah, that second place...and if there is something after death...that would be the third place.
thank you, andrew,
j.