imagining oils
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
imagining oils
show me the color
of your sadness
and I will crayon mine
to blend
together, our drawing
will assuage
the feelings
until the signatures dry.
erin-cilberto
11/23/22
© 2022 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
Seems an explantion of empathy. I will not own your sadness but will blend with it and understand it takes time to mend.
Winston
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thank you for your kind words,
j.
Simply written and said and I like the idea of melding. So cool.
Posted 2 Years Ago
Simply written and said and I like the idea of melding. So cool.
2 Years Ago
thank you, Tania,
j.
Over the past 4 years I seem to have lived large parts of my life coloured by blues and blacks, as I suppose many have.
Would be a good thing if medical science could develop a cure for aching, broken hearts.
Morning Jacob
Posted 2 Years Ago
Over the past 4 years I seem to have lived large parts of my life coloured by blues and blacks, as I suppose many have.
Would be a good thing if medical science could develop a cure for aching, broken hearts.
Morning Jacob
2 Years Ago
Good morning, Gee. And thanks for your thoughts...
j.
Oh! and that would be creative love :>
your ideas many times set the imagination wide, I see this an invitation for love in all its ups and downs. so creative... so beautiful...
Posted 2 Years Ago
Oh! and that would be creative love :>
your ideas many times set the imagination wide, I see this an invitation for love in all its ups and downs. so creative... so beautiful...
2 Years Ago
thank you for your kind review, lightsong,
j.
I don't think you're saying misery loves company, although that could be one interpretation. Perhaps a better one would be the suffering know best how to comfort the suffering.
Posted 2 Years Ago
I don't think you're saying misery loves company, although that could be one interpretation. Perhaps a better one would be the suffering know best how to comfort the suffering.
2 Years Ago
spot on, sir.
thank you,
j.
Truly beautiful sentiment here J. Sharing a sorrow can certainly help alleviate some of the sadness. A poem of compassion and empathy. Such a gem.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
Truly beautiful sentiment here J. Sharing a sorrow can certainly help alleviate some of the sadness. A poem of compassion and empathy. Such a gem.
Chris
2 Years Ago
thank you, Chris,
j.
Sharing your sorrow with another can help lighten the burden.
This is a beautiful offer of understanding and support.
Posted 2 Years Ago
Sharing your sorrow with another can help lighten the burden.
This is a beautiful offer of understanding and support.
2 Years Ago
Thank you, Ciara,
j.
2 Years Ago
You're welcome Jacob 😊
A heart felt offering to one who is experiencing some sadness in their life. Wonderfully written Jacob
Posted 2 Years Ago
A heart felt offering to one who is experiencing some sadness in their life. Wonderfully written Jacob
2 Years Ago
appreciate you, will,
j.
A Michael Angelo portrait on the Ceiling of our Cathedral… Poetry painted with Prayers. gently, Pat
Posted 2 Years Ago
A Michael Angelo portrait on the Ceiling of our Cathedral… Poetry painted with Prayers. gently, Pat
2 Years Ago
thank you, Pat,
j.
Wonderful write, I can relate to your words, love it ;-}
Posted 2 Years Ago
Wonderful write, I can relate to your words, love it ;-}
2 Years Ago
Thank you, willow,
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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