the old time slot

the old time slot

 

 

a look at Neville Brand's scar

it was untouchable

my heart has a similar scar

it is also untouchable

 

but I don't rate Walter Winchell's

narration,

just a few poems

that will never do well

in the Nielson ratings.

 

 

erin--cilberto

11/18/22

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, you still have our endorsement for court poet, bother the ratings. Enjoyed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fabian...
j.

[AYVID N]

Some things are just untouchable and also inimitable!
Scars on the face or on the heart.
Ratings are here today and gone tomorrow.
The scars and the words endure.
This poem felt so special to me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you so much for your words, DIVYA,
j.

[AYVID N]

Its my pleasure always, dear Jacob.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Oh Capone, with a flair in it thrown and
W. Winchell's on the fake news throne.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah yes.....thank you, Frederick...
thank you...