Crystalized Moon

Crystalized Moon

 

 

sleet sheets

frozen exercise

in love

so still

there is only movement

of imagined caress

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/12/22

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Everything is so still and frozen that love seems a hopeless cause here.

there is only movement
of imagined caress

Its marvellous how my mind played out these words. The ultimate description of something so inanimate!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Gave me the chills reading this; a frozen love feeling. Title is great and the ending is a harsh reality.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome 😊..

[Red Brick Keshner]

Brought to me an image of a mechanical, frosted out, hollow exchange of love that is still there but crusted over with tepid routine and the slightest hint of lost love and aloneness. Strikes strong and deep J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Frederick...
j.

[Andrew John]

Shimmering sheets showing such movement beneath a moving moon. Ah, yes. Thank you, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Andrew,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You gave me the image of a beautiful though cruelly aloof moon. So very far away. People can distance themselves in the same way J. Great poetry.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, they surely can. Thank you, Chris,
j.