Crystalized Moon

Crystalized Moon

 

 

sleet sheets

frozen exercise

in love

so still

there is only movement

of imagined caress

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/12/22

Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

Clean and simple, loving and warm. Very nice

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Brad,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

I am getting a quite strong vibe of T.E. Hulme in this offering, Jacob. I've been a big admirer of Hulme who could say so much with so little, as do you. Congrats.

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Winston...appreciate you.
j.

[light and ashes]

Interesting and amazing...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Light.
j.

[light and ashes]

You are always welcome,
jacob.

[willweb]

I don't know whether to shiver or quiver while reading this so I will choose the latter. Very creative my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, will,
j.

[Scott Kris]

I like it when you write a poem I read several ways.
It’s part of the quality of your work I think to find you let the reader decide where to pause and what to connect where.
It really Matt we ta in life where we place the emphasis of all the happenings to reach our meanings.
Thank you fir sharing Jacob.

Scott.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Scott,
j.

[Weeping willow]

Beautiful write that speaks out into the night ;-]

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, willow,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob… it is that time of year when we know there will be Frost on the Pumpkin.. where even Love feels the Chill… wrapped in Sweaters and needing to be Held in the Warmth of Romantic Overtures… the Fires of Autumn begin to fade and we are made to be Brave and let Nature have it’s Way… when the Moon is casting it’s Spell. tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Nature will have its way, regardless.
thank you, Pat,
j.

[Elaine]

This makes me think of being drawn to something so distant and cool and how longing often teases us into imagining more

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Elaine,
j.

[Andrew John]

Shimmering sheets showing such movement beneath a moving moon. Ah, yes. Thank you, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Andrew,
j.

[Ken e Bujold]

very much enjoy the duality of this poem J. on one hand the straight forward expression of an unrequited love, but on a metaphorical level it is a splendid look inside the writer's frustration of an empty page

ken

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ken,
j.