Vow

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Vow

blind faith

invisible God

praying is kissing

the future

hoping to wed

a good place

in the beyond.

erin-cilberto

11/11/22

© 2022 jacob erin-cilberto

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AYVID N

Faith and worship seem a business.
Like a hotel reservation perhaps
Pay/invest more to reserve a better place.
Not sure this is the kind of faith that will deliver the goods.
I like the way you said it here.

Posted 2 Years Ago

2 Years Ago

I really like your reply...might get to the desk and find out they gave our room away.
j.

Gee

Perhaps that is it then, religion nowt more than a means to an end , a way of ensuring a place to stay in the afterlife, that and a crutch to get through life when it gets a wee bit tough.
Can't say I'll ever be signing up:)
Good morning Jacob

Posted 2 Years Ago

2 Years Ago

I don't know if I will reenlist.
thank you for the read and thoughts, Gee,
j.

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Author

jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL

About

Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..