poem 3,493

  poem 3,493

 

 

the stone moves slowly

love finds freedom in flight

a life resurrected

a heart ascending

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/16/22

Reviews

[AYVID N]

The greatest and most inspiring story for mankind, ever. Thank you for narrating it in your words, dear Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, kind poet,
j.

[Carola]

escape from an expired romance!
wow! nearly 3500 poems... 67 per year, 5.6 a month, so you write just over one a week. amazing.
so far I've managed about 54, with 35 here on WC.
cheerio carola

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just randomly picked those numbers for titles...I write several a week, usually 4 or 5 at a time...I write like Beat poet Frank O'Hara....they come in bunches...I am just a conduit...no real talent, just lucky to get to do this...
I don't know how many I have written since 1970 when I started...
thank you, carola...
j.

[Andrew John]

Long time to've been writing them, J. You never stop!

[Ken Simm.]

Succint Easter. Excellently done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, ken,
j.

[Gee]

Seems we both had the urge to write about the resurrection:)
Nicely done Jacob.
Today chocolate is on the banned list.
Hope you are well

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hate those bans....
thanks, Gee,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Even if the stone rolls slowly, it still rolls and resurrection happens. Hopefully it compensates for the crucifixion that preceded it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hopefully.....thank you, John,
j.

[lightsong]

Who said that short poems can't be powerful and whole? You always prove them to be so. this is magnificent, it all starts with letting go, let love be and flow... then the heart, the spirit, the soul... all lifted up and miracles begin.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, lightsong,
j.

[JE Falcon]

Lots to think about in such a short poem. --- Thanks!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, JE,
j.

[Dara]

A perfect read for this Easter Sunday morning. A message of hope, of love conquering all. I hope yours is a very happy one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, and Hoppy Easter, Dara,
j.

[Dara]

:-) Thank you

[Chris Shaw]

Love always lifts you off the ground. That's when the heart dances best. Meaningful brevity. Happy Easter J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris,
you as well.