senryu on site

senryu on site

in the still of night

archeological find

the bones of a poem

erin-cilberto

3/13/22

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

And may revered no es be treated with respect. Well written, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, M.J.
j.

[KAREN]

I like this poem! It's thought provoking and so true!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Karen,
j.

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[Patricia Wedel]

Amazing Archeological discovery....
Love the antiquity of night Senyru's
Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Pat.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

An old poem never dies just waits to be discovered.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

andrew, I am just waiting, as well.
thank you,
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We are poetic archeologist digging in our minds for an invaluable poem to treasure for life.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, I believe we are...
thank you, Cowboy,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Awesome twist on a great brevity of a poem. You do the Japanese justice. Wonderful sir Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Sami...
I am not much on form generally, but I just love the brevity of their haiku and senryu...and they are nice challenge.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Great! You are welcome sir Jacob.

[Relic]

I was just working on a poem about bones. haha

Good Senryu, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, relic...poetic coincidences...
j.

[knighngale]

wow, that's a clever one, little one, lol too clever! love it. :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, knighngale,
j.

[knighngale]

most definately, :D

[JE Falcon]

It has a nice finish, I like surprises.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, JE,
j.

[Mike Keenan]

Jacob, Carl Jung would be proud of you. Nice touch. The unconscious is an amazing source.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Mike,
j.