save the paper

save the paper

 

 

 

under wraps

love, a pandora's box

the bow is stained

in rose red

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

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Reviews

[Corset]

Or a lovely accident waiting to happen, I would totally save the paper from the gift of Pandora's box, especially when rose stained red bows are great to reuse at Christmas time :D Valentines Day is coming around the corner.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great to reuse...I like that...
thank you, Corset,
j.

[Lisasview]

Funny, when ever i hear the words Pandoras Box. I think of the night club in Hollywood where Sonny met Cher..
She was there.. i guess singing..
And, he said that when he saw her he fell in love..or so says all that knew him..
I knew them both.. back in the day..
Love is such a tricky thing..
Loved your words..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow you knew them knew them?
That is so cool...My first Ex and I saw them in 1972 or 3 at SIU...they were so good in concert...Cher changed outfits about a million times...
Comedian David Brenner was the opening act...
we had seen him the one time he was on Carson and loved him
they were great that night...
Yes, love is tricky.
thanks for sharing, Lisa
j.

[Lisasview]

And they had a line of clothes.. called Marks and Bloom.. bell bottoms - double breasted
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And they had a line of clothes.. called Marks and Bloom.. bell bottoms - double breasted
Stripped outfits.
And I was one of their top models..
I remember that they fought a lot....
I could hear them in their trailer.
Lisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh Lisa, I wanted to read all of your response but it got cut off, and sometimes the "read more" does not work...could you resend please?

[Lisasview]

Oh no problem.. So they had this line of clothes.. wild strip Double breasted long jackets..
And I was one of their top models.. I remember that they fought a lot..I could hear them in their little caravan..I now wonder why they ventured into the clothing business..Maybe because Cher was so into clothes..and still is..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think they ended up being friends...but yes, those music or hollywood relationships can be so up and down, in and out.
that is pretty neat that you did that for their line.
Was that an enjoyable experience?

[Relic]

Love is a risky proposition being nothing is guarenteed. Anger and aggravation or often included for future use.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that..."for future use"

thanks Relic

[andrew mitchell]

Yes paper is like skin nice to look at but what’s underneath makes or breaks this little parcel.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Clever, andrew and so true...

[John the Baptist]

Romantic love is indeed a pandora's box. You never know what's going to come flying out of it. Maybe the celibate monks were onto something.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, their life is quite uncomplicated..
thank you, John,
j.

[Patricia]

This is so heartfelt and one of my new favorites by you. Bravo!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Patricia,
j.

[Fran Marie]

"That crazy little thing called love"
saving the paper; thinking
outside of the pandora box..
on this one..much enjoyed


Cleverly penned piece

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fran,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

That paper ... carefully smoothed out and gently folded and placed in the drawer with the other older wraps are there to remind us there once was love.
Not to mention the bow of rose red pressed against the heart.

We never know which way it will go when we open Pandora's box.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ted,
j.

[Amber Stone]

epic writing, ...
the beautiful but sometimes convulsed universe of love, maybe the secret of life, so exquisite and concisely summarized in the above 4 perfect poetic lines. thank U, Maestro, for sharing this.
sincerely, Amber.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Amber,
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You can't put a good spin to breakups when it comes to your heart. Love this poem Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dale, appreciate your read and words,
j.