Love Poem

Love Poem

I slipped you into my folder

concussed heart

envelopes love

cuddling with hope

you will file me into your system

as well

I can't remember where I am

but feel I have known you

before, during and after

the fall

it's worth the risk

to fall again and again

I'm sure I know you

I'm sure.

erin-cilberto

1/13/22

Reviews

[Kim S.]

beautiful write here.....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Beckies,
j.

[Throwing Romeo]

It's the slip and fall
the concussion.
That reminder of
delicate beauty
only found in
unfulfilled desire.

Romantically
impressed...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, T.R.
j.

[Patricia]

Now that is a love poem! Yes fall again and again, it’s always worth it in my opinion. Love and all the feelings that come Witt it even the insecurities and potential loss… it’s worth it. Wonderful writing, so much energy in this!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you kindly, Patricia,
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man, jacob! i don't know ... i think enough is enough lest i go deaf, dumb and blind ... i'm too old for another plunge me thinks ;) great write says i! it simply hurts too much .. maybe gently stroll down a hill .. no plunging for me. ;)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, me too...but I can pretend with poetry.
thank you, E.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

ain't that the truth! how fortunate we are ... thoughts flying free .. inked for all time .. remembered or not .. yeah! we get all kinds of things out there in pretend land .. maybe your next poem "Pretend Land" ;)))))))))))))

[Patricia Wedel]

I respect your feelings… so gentle and certain… when it happens out of the blue… you know… and go with the flow… a treasure to cherish … Be still my 💜 Heart. tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kindness, Pat,
j.

[lightsong]

So beautiful... so so beautiful... glad I came across this one, writing love on your own style, its essence, its powers, its feelings and closeness, the fears, the insecurities... that may came across . I love it more that it's only one verse. just as it should be. it's like, take it as it is or simply do not...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I appreciate your kind words, lightsong....
j.

[AYVID N]

Speaks to me of the trust in falling, the faith....our assurance to self that we know them...sometimes we land in the right place and sometimes we die from the fall.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

let's land in the right place...that is a good idea.
Thank you for your insightful comment, DIVYA.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Falling in love, it's hard to get those hooks out.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and then the wounds remain.
thank you, andrew.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Just beautiful Jacob
No words again will see it fit

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie,
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Makes me think of my uncle. He has alzhimers but still remembers my aunt ( just not always her name).

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as long as he remembers her...that is a plus...
I hate that disease...and I also hate dementia...my dad was in a unit...towards the end he forgot everything...luckily the last time I saw him, he knew me...and I treasured that time with him.
thank you, Cherrie,
j.