Growl

Growl

 

 

coordination

for a riot's breath

inhale lies, exhale hate

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/28/21

Reviews

[Anjeline]

Powerful piece. Short but right on point describing the mentality of people who are simply against unity and peace.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Anjeline,
j.

[William Michael Reeves]

I was wondering what that cloud was hanging over the insurrection a year ago. Now you've explained it. It was a cloud of lies and hate mixing with the virus breathing and breeding in the stupidity of that moment

[jacob erin-cilberto]

That scenario would most likely be one that would fit this, I am sure.
thank you, Bill,
j.

[John the Baptist]

I've read several articles lately about extremist groups and how websites pander to their warped beliefs. They seem to limit themselves to such sites for the sake of confirmation bias. I wonder about our future if major members of both political parties don't publicly disavow them.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and yet they won't...they fuel the fires.
thank you, John,
j.

[Light and ashes]

Great! 100 ..............

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, light.
j.

[Light and ashes]

you're welcome, jacob. :)

[Patricia]

that inhale is bad for the soul and health, and those growls never seem to cease, powerful write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Patricia,
j.

[.]

I believe the title says so much, dear Jacob. Such a strong, guttural sound, enough to drive any to rage and riot. It reminds me of the rioting in Washington last year, lies inhaled and hate exploding at the altar of democracy. A very powerful senryu! ⚘

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Jamila,
j.

[NFA]

So much power and truth in these words. I love this style of poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Victor,
j.

[Tania Mo]

Growl in itself is a powerful word. You put it to great use. I like that a lot.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tania,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

This brevity is so powerful J. Inhale lies at your peril. A warning for sure.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Poems are always stronger when they hold a truth in them. You’re poetry is always so honest and down to earth, not covered up by anything else but just the words. ‘Inhale lies, exhale hate.’ How wonderfully powerful. Thank you for sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Vertigo.
j.