Gorgeous Statistic

Gorgeous Statistic

 

 

fire arms,

bullet tongue

 

laugh the shrapnel

into oblivion

 

take a place on the death chart

casualties happen

 

it's only a war of attrition

and the battlefield is amour    

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/2/21

 

 

Reviews

[lightsong]

that's how death seems to be in the late years... people die randomly, maybe I next, maybe You next... just look back in the old years and You will see that death wasn't like this, most people used to live long and died in normal ways. how sad, how very sad... how the world turned to be.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Used to be...ain't no more...so sad, yes.
thank you, lightsong,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Did you mean to post this twice? All's fair in love and war, right? The winner often laughs making the loser feel even worse. Two poems about shattered love....you are in a mood. lYdi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

No, the site did that...
thanks for catching it....I will fix that...
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

The site does strange things to formatting. Sometimes I leave spaces between stanzas and they disappear after I post the poem.

[no tell writer]

Amazing write Jacob, glad you reopened your account. I like reading your wonderful writes,
they are so full of meaning...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Katzie,
j.