clerically sane, clinically insane ( a six word romance novel)

clerically sane, clinically insane

( a six word romance novel)

 

 

file my love away, forever yours...

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

And not a shade of grey! Nice one J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes, agreeing with others, this is definitely a 500 page novel of the ilk of Dr Zhivago, do not what the law( the church) say, your love will forever will be hers and vise verse, no matter what the background ( war, peace, etc)
Only you could do this J
Amazing
Yours, B.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for the kind words, Betty...Yes, it is a little bit too long isn't it...I will work on brevity.
ha ha
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

You are brevity!

[Cherrie]

I love the six word challenge. They are always power packed. Excellent work, you built a complete world in this one line.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Cherrie...you are very kind.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words Jacob. Running love cannot be caught. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes it cannot be caught...thank you, Coyote...
j.

[Chris Shaw]

It's got to be Dr Zhivago. The wonderful Julie Christie and Omar Shariff. Seen it at least six times over the years. Every type of frustration and crazy thrown at the screen in the frozen backdrop of Russia with fur coats into the bargain. Tragic ending.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Interesting parallel...that would fit.
thank you, Chris,
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I tried to make the poem as long as the movie...but fell a bit short.
Funny, I never even thought of that movie when composing this...but several have seen it as that...
so interesting to me...I love it!

[Chris Shaw]

This is the bees knees when it comes to brevity. An epic in a nutshell :) Love it J.

[Corset]

This brings to mind the novel and movie "Doctor Zhivago" crazy love with hemostats

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and it's almost as long as the film...:)))
thank you, Corset,
j.

[John the Baptist]

I am going out on a limb and say this one is somewhat shorter than "War and Peace." The ending is happier, though.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha yes, by a page or two.
thank you for the smile, John,
j.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Jacob, you are prolific in your writings, my friend. Your muse truly does not give you a break. I am both envious and in awe of both the production and quality of your art. Continued success and inspiring others to do the same and speak their truth and aspirations in the art of words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Carlos.
j.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

you are very welcome, my friend. And for the record I would categorize myself clinically insane when it comes to love, and perhaps everything else in life. Hey, us storytellers and poets have to have some insanity to write some of the most profound words ever to be contemplated. Hahaha