the Olive Garden special of the day

the Olive Garden special of the day

fine lines

thick faces

billy club cadavers walking

breaking

entering

Confederate flags proudly waved

1860 is built within the castle

the moat is screaming with alligator breath

This is America,

hallelujah

hallelujah

the Great Great Great canopy

filament

sky writing

Russia is watching you

China is watching you

North Korea is watching you

March on

March on

break the glass

America is falling on her a*s.

erin-cilberto

1/8/2021 

Reviews

[AYVID N]

This is such a powerful poem on the present unrest. The world is indeed watching, some with shock and sadness, concern and yet some also watching gloating as vultures. I hope the worst is over because the world is in such a fragile state presently.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the vultures are surely circling...
thank you, DIVYA...
j.

[Robert Trakofler]

if you look sharply at the glass ceiling you will see little holes where the marionette strings get dropped thru that control the hands typing on keyboard conspiracy theorists and truth manipulators to draw attention away from truth and facts to make the sheeple perform acrobatic feats of stupidity in the name of freedom to seal their fates of bondage! Dear Jacob, we can only witness and whisper and hope the whispers become a scream but we mustn't give up brother!!!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can never give up...yes, never. Thank you for the positive, and for the words on this poem...I see many are staying away from me lately...I understand...just expressing...either that or imploding.
j.

[Robert Trakofler]

One thing I have noticed friend...the more truthful the composition the more people shy away from it I'd say you are doing a splendid job:) I love it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, brother bunny....most often what I write is just poetry that stems from past experience, not current...this is different lately...
I am draining the sink so to speak....one that has overflowed lately...in this moment, not another.
j.