Night

Night

orgasmic words,

on the edge

of

exploding onto 

the white sheet

of 

the act 

the act of writing

of

poetry

lying afterward

in repose

I am amazed

watching the poem

smoke a cigarette.

I am sated

of...

erin-cilberto

12/29/2020

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

title really works well for me! i like the enjambment .. you don't usually use it much ... love V4 ... makes me chuckle ... giving the poem a stereotypical male roll of the cig after satisfying himself .. cracks me up sir! how does it feel to be used in such a manner my friend :)))))))))))))))))) and your open ended closing leaves me unsatisfied but filled with imaginations ... what does poetry fulfill is in ... a wealth of things i suppose ... Happy New Year, jacob .. all the best to ya!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind and understanding review, E.
j.

[Neville]

I totally get this ... Having quit many years ago .. I must confess.. there are still a couple of occasions when I could very easily light up ............... N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

But you, my friend, have Not quit writing...you make really good poetry come into this world.
j.

[Neville]

....... you have no idea how much those words mean to me jacob .. loads dont come close :)read more
....... you have no idea how much those words mean to me jacob .. loads dont come close :)
N.

[Stella Armour]

Sated of ?
maybe long awaited inspiration , or the grappling yet again to be creative and not have a sleeping imagination.
So many ways find that lovely calmness of mind again....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Stella,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

When we pen a poem...it seems if the heavens have opened their Heart... to share Eons of rebirth when the Earth is being poetic in Artful and colorful rebellion of the Godess of 💕 love.
tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like this...thank you for your open mind and heart, Pat,
j.