Don’t ever denigrate yourself; you are the epitome of poetic grace, the mentor of all mentors; I’m not sure this isn’t a spoof, because it’s so hard to believe. That anyone would put you and your work down; don’t ever put yourself down Jacob; I hope this was a spoof; another great write ( despite its content)
Always, xo Betty
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
this was actually inspired by treatment i have seen done to some other poets...
thank you for.. read morethis was actually inspired by treatment i have seen done to some other poets...
thank you for your kind words, Betty,
j.
4 Years Ago
Well if you’ve seen it, that really scary; kudos for your poem! Best, B
The first stanza shocked me in its vitriol. Most unlike Jacob I thought. Did you have a visit from my troll or is this self recrimination as a poet questions their own worth and feels the platitudes and the lack of elevated success by being acknowledged and published (The heights) hurt but rational self says they are less important than the substance and the nuanced writing that is exact and meaningful. Another metaphorical write that gets the little grey cells fighting for supremacy!
First reading I wondered how to interpret, its finish had me laughing and yet had frowned through the first few lines. Read again.. ' think understanding is creeping in. Paused, pause, line by phrase, seems things aren't always what's wanted, liberties taken and wrapped in that fall from dignity or wherever. Perhaps?
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
oh, perhaps....i like what you see here, em, and i appreciate your thoughtful pondering..
j.
4 Years Ago
Might have to read it again, J! Forgive the late review, been sunk in a long list of things essenti.. read moreMight have to read it again, J! Forgive the late review, been sunk in a long list of things essential Rake care, keep safe. Please
Been awake all night and went into the downward slope.. then, had a honey sandwich and eureka! am no.. read moreBeen awake all night and went into the downward slope.. then, had a honey sandwich and eureka! am now thinking from letter M. now!
There are times when I turn myself inside out
to air my thoughts that have been hidden...
Another perspective can be a lifesaver with a
pocketful of fresh beginnings. tenderly, Pat
Sounds like a hard hearted lady. Or was it a rejection letter? Either way, don't jump. Especially sideways. I mean, where would you land?
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
in between maybe...
But okay, i won't jump...i will just write sideways nonsense like always... read morein between maybe...
But okay, i won't jump...i will just write sideways nonsense like always.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..