unfinished business

unfinished business

 

 

 

i am the fallacy 

of love's

errand

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/20/2020

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Fallacies lack evidence to support them.
Love is a natural flow like a Waterfall on
a mountainside. You can let your love flow
and others drink the clear pure water.
gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

another beautifully poetic reply...better than the poem itself.
thank you, Pat,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

My pleasure... 🌈

[Chris Shaw]

So much said here. You won't be the first or the last who comes to this conclusion. Bitter/sweet. Conveyed with such impact Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...it would be too much pressure to be the last.
:)))
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You have a great sense of humour my friend :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Seven words in three lines yet such a powerful impact and impression given as the protagonist laments love's short journey.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, John,
j.

[Kent Rawski]

Short deep and oh so bittersweet how many have fallen into that fallacy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kent,
j.