unfinished business

unfinished business

 

 

 

i am the fallacy 

of love's

errand

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/20/2020

Reviews

[duff]

Oh ya. Im digging this all day. Are we a slave or a leader of love? Depending on the individual maybe it doesn't matter as long as you enjoy it. The title is two words classic. Hell ya Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, duff,
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I come here after quite some time, only to find this piece by you. Precise and very much bitter sweet. Love renders us dumb at some points, I guess...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, YumnaKay...and so glad to see you around again...
j.

[Dave]

Love isn't easy, is it? If we listened too much to the poets, alas us? what is there to really believe?
When it is there and true the heart soars to unforeseen heights when it is lost the depths of Hell has no bottom.

Take care my friend - Dave

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true...thank you, Dave,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Maybe true love has no errand. Maybe it just wants to be recognized.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that's definitely a thought...thank you, John,
j.

[phill..m]

Love comes with conditions Jacob,and can be switched on/off depending on each persons expectations being fulfilled,or not meeting the mark. People find love many times over and then apply the same conditions. It's a kind of fallacy check list that must be met. enjoyed the read. Phill.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, phill.
j.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Deep cut and sublime woah, Cupids arrow can be sent into fallacy yes. Kudos for this great poem in brevity.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, S.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes these errands don’t pay well. On love’s terms it’s hard to be objective. A fine write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Thank you for the education word man, I always appreciate it and yet in such few words. Nice write. tyfs

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for feeling something from this, Cyprian,
j.

[barleygirl]

Oh hell yeah! I've drifted so far from my original concept of "love", this is how it often looks & feels! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, you made me think of my original concept...and then I grew up.
thank you, Margie,
are you still in your place?
j.

[barleygirl]

The fire near me is in the last stages of simmering. It got damn close, almost scared me a little bit, but I never evacuated during the 10-day mandatory order. Only one of my neighbors returned this weekend, so it was still super quiet here, which I love!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am just glad you are safe.

[barleygirl]

Thank you for caring, luv!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

absolutely!

[Corset]

I just think Cupid is batshit crazy and extremely near sighted at times. Love happens or it doesn't I guess, but when he hits his mark, wow, it can really hurt or really be very amazing yes?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Cupid needs new contacts!
Thank you, Corset,
j.

[Corset]

oh yeah.........................