Dial Ego for Murder

Dial Ego for Murder

 

 

disparage my heart,

insult my love

placate your own vanity

assuage the impatience of your 

superfluous, spandex mind

 

but never doubt that sincerity

gets its revenge.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/31/2020

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I love the directness of this piece and the conviction that karma will have its day. Excellent Jacob. Such strength in brevity.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The invective in this has a life of its own as it slaps along in defiance of a tort. As always you craft your poetry without fat on the carcass and each word filled with flavour!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, John...it is encouraging as I feel lately my words are just limping along....
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I certainly don't read limp into anything you produce Jacob! I was told more than once all writers (artists) have self doubt and it is a driver most of the time.