Threatening

Threatening 

 

 

when the storm excites

benevolence is an archaic blues

wind damage scars our aliveness

but leaves us breathing 

in raspy, grateful wisps of magic

 

hunker down,

life is coming.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/26/2020

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed life can be a stormy affair and this one ends on a hopeful note. Filled with your usual metaphor magic Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Yes, life can certainly be a storm ... black nights ... grey days ... buckets of tears ... and then the skies turn menacing.

Buckle up ... wear a slicker and galoshes. ;>}

[jacob erin-cilberto]

got 'em, Ted....

I am ready.
j.

[Papaya]

It's odd isn't it, how brushes with danger make us feel so alive.
Suppose that's why there are so many thrill seekers.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, so true.

thank you, Ana,
j.