Tell Laura, I love her

Tell Laura, I love her

 

 

when storms meet for the first time

onlookers become incontinent

unable to hold their wares

inside,

 

apologize

as they blow away.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/25/2020

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This of course reminded me of the teenage tragedy song of 1960 by Ray Peterson. I guess it made me think of the fragility of love and just how easily that which seemed set in stone merely dissipates in a puff of wind. Tragedy told in a brutally short verse for impact Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

My third ex is named Laura...she hated that song...

I was ten when it came out....wanted to be a stock car racer.
thank you, John,
j.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Loved this. People apologizing even as their wares blow away. Etiquettes first always. Even in incontinence!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Dhara,
j.