a novel condensed

a novel condensed

 

 

 

 

this is a short poem

about love,

 

 

the end.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/2/19

Reviews

[CLR9]

Hah. What a great poem to inspire love poetry. Leave that s**t dead and buried.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, CLR9---
j.

[Norman 223]

A fine example of
PRECIS
with
PRECISION
N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks for the smile...i am so glad you are back, Norman...
j.

[Norman 223]

This is an even shorter review:
)))

N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Norman...
j.

[Jennesis]

This made me smile. Sometimes the condensed version still tells the story

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jen,
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Looks to be a smash.
Perfectly fits most modern readers' increasingly shortening attention span.
Also, since I am more often a "teller" than a "shower" (not the wet word)
it is a piece of work with which I can strongly relate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, those attention spans have gotten short like texts...excuse me i need a "shower"...(also not the wet word) ha ha.
thanks for smile, Jimmy,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

I can't wait for the sequel and the soundtrack:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there was a slight skip on the record (soundtrack) so we missed the entire thing...damn.
thanks, andrew.

[John the Baptist]

Somewhat briefer than War and Peace. I imagine the movie version will be, too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and it will be filmed in a minute...
thank you, John,
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

John,

did you see it? the movie, i mean.
okay, let me run that again for you----

[John the Baptist]

Sorry, j. I missed it when I sneezed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh well, but did you hear the two note soundtrack?

[John the Baptist]

I did catch that. Made me think of Schubert's Unfinished Symphony.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love that symphony, so pretty...

[Beccy]

Foreword by Aphrodite. 'Endings start with beginnings.'

Beccy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Beccy...
perfect foreword....but hey, do you think the novel is too long and boring? Should i start cutting?
:)
thanks so much,
j.

[Beccy]

Fine as it is jacob. Any more cuts and you'll be leaving before the event. Not that the odd hasty retreat is a bad thing :))

[barleygirl]

My love life precisely! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

join the book, oops i mean love, club!
j.