mouthing trifles over a rosary of intent

mouthing trifles over a rosary of intent

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

mouthing trifles over a rosary of intent

 

 

 

all souls in my morning java

and javelins through the sugar cube of a heart

i am riddled with holy doughnut regret

 

glazed over in prayer

trying to find penitence 

before lunch,

 

but the clock is ticking in a quiet church of the mind

and all i can find

 

is the devil's crooked smile

reflecting up at me

 

in the bubbling conscience

of my soup kitchen 

pantry

 

as my sins evacuate

and my napkin saturates itself

 

with my contrite contrition.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/1/19

© 2019 jacob erin-cilberto


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"I am riddled with holy doughnut regret". What a great line. I love doughnuts. Your poem made me think of the guilt I have if I over indulge and eat too many. This could equally apply to love. Is your Catholic faith here making you seek contrition for that Devil smile on your face for what happened the night before? That's. where you took me Jacob.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

i appreciate your sharing where this poem took you Chris...guilt is a pretty strong element of Catho.. read more
The devil's crooked smile makes me smile. Appreciated so much Jacob.

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

i appreciate your kind comment, DIVYA,
j.
Well, there are contritions and then there are contritions. "Holy doughnut regret" is probably not going to cut it if you're trying to get absolution for one of the seven deadly. Also, you should probably try to wipe off that devil's crooked smile before you go to confession.

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

i smile way too much, i know.
thank you for your words and the chuckle, John.
j.
Take another wafer and call me in the morning.
I always thought the Catholics and Jews had the best history for writers. Atheists and Agnostics work well fighting zombies and sharks ... but the protestants, what do we have? Billy Graham's legacy? I don't think our side really believes in the Devil ... can't picture two Jehovah's Witnesses as the stars of the Exorcist.
Never saw Jesus in a piece of toast ... so much for that clock ticking in the quiet church of my mind.

Now, where was I? Oh yeah, pass the sacramental wine ... make it Merlot.

A strange place to go, I know ... but here I am.

A good write j.



Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

okay here is the Merlot, but save me a sip would ya..?
thank you for the insightful review, T.. read more
Stoppit Jacob! Oh how well I know these days of atonement of the later years- we spend our time on conceptual knees begging some form of forgivenss - Excellent thanks

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

yes, we do...it's that time...
thank you, Michael.
j.
Im still stuck on how wonderfully descriptive a rosary of intent is Jacob. It is both black and white, in that it can be read, in my warped little mind at least, as being both ominous sounding and a softly sighed regret.
I am guessing the latter in this case, as that ticking clock in the church of your mind sparked thoughts i have often thought, with that constant thunk that has visited my mind too often.
Good luck finding penitence at that time though, for me to find it they would have to add a few hundred hours to the day.

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

for me probably a few thousand...thanks for understanding and relating, my friend.
j.
I'm not sure if I fully grasp the intent, but it seems like your intent (to not eat) is overridden (by the desire to eat). Perhaps this is a simplistic view, but it's what my brain is receiving. Oops! Sorry … got to go … I can hear the chocolate calling. Rating 100/100 … Edited to denote 93.5% rating after giving you 100, with there only being one rating. Weird!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Linda Marie Van Tassell

5 Years Ago

It's really sad that she lacked the confidence to pursue publication, particularly with the volumes .. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

she only published 11 poems in her lifetime...and those were done anonymously...
I imagine yo.. read more
Linda Marie Van Tassell

5 Years Ago

Agreed. :-)

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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