folding Laundry

folding Laundry

 

 

 

i find you disturbing

your heart abrasive

your touch raw and baffling

 

my mind a dryer

tossing and turning

emotions

 

i find you disturbing

my heart reluctant

i touch you discreetly

pensively

 

but then those wrinkles

iron out

when i realize

you are part of my cycle

 

and exactly what i need.

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/2/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Any warmth from the dryer will help smooth out those wrinkles long before the iron finishes the job.

Sounds like this laundry cycle turned out better than expected. A surprise result.

Like this one Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Having folded so much laundry in my day (I started out as a nurse) I get this one. Allegory to die for as the protagonist agonises about the character of his intended but reaches the conclusion that this is as smooth as it gets!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, John,
j.