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peaceful morning dew

suddenly blown off grass blades

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erin-cilberto

8/5/19

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

beautiful again you nailed it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie..
j.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice metaphor poem I enjoyed the simplicity of it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, JungLee.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Brutally sad words in this Haiku. Is there a peaceful morning anymore? So many deaths and so many lives shattered. Yes, they are gone too soon. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi..for your understanding response.
j.

[Cassandra Marie]

a well-written haiku. This one deserves to be seen.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Cassandra,
j.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is so very beautiful, I really like this write, wonderful Haiku

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, kescha...
j.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

not a problem at all sir....

[Chris Shaw]

Dew beads blown off grass blades. The early morning peace shattered unexpectedly. How poignant is this? We live in violent times Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your understanding words, Chris,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed a senyru that captures the futility of this 'unexpected' inhuman atrocity. You use harmless everyday sights as the metaphor for those early morning shoppers and much grass died and much suffered.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's just intolerable...thank you John....
I haven't felt this angry since i don't know when...and anger has never really been a part of my personality....so many old friends have said that they have never seen me really mad....i am now...
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think in order to stop ther madness people have to be angry and motivated. Kids with AK47s, there is no excuse for anyone other than a serving soldier to have a gun of that power.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

absolutely, John.......................

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. You allowed the reader to feel and see every words written. Thank you Jacob for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote...
such a helpless feeling right now.
j.