Heavy Mental

Heavy Mental  

 

 

drifting composure

(unsuspecting ducks on pond)

composing swan songs

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/5/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

When I read this I was puzzled but then there was a terrible commotion and all the ducks were in a panic. There was an intruder in the water upsetting the applecart of peace. That's what happens in real life. It only takes one to cause havoc but.......

when I came back for a second read, there was perfect tranquility, peace reigned in the pond.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting...guess this can go in two directions for sure...
thank you, Chris,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This senyru certainly has me wracking my brains. I can see the majesty and composure of ducks on a pond but your ducks are unsuspecting and therefore another target for a shooter as death visits in unexpected places. Tragic as always.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

twice in one weekend here..unsuspecting...
thank you, John,
j.