reasons

reasons

 

 

a sluice-way for tears

impressionable ducts leak

sorrow filled causeway

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/2/19

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

So short and brief but still showcase the message it encapsulated.
Sad memories and disappointment and lot of this kind of situation erode the cheeks with with the rivers of tears. And they are always painful to experience.

Nicely penned.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kay,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A flowing waterway of an allegorical senyru you have here Jacob. It has a deep feel of sadness, uncontrollable sadness.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Forgot to say it is also so appropriate here in the UK as we are all watching a dam that is close to breaching because of torential rain!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hope it doesn't John...
Mother Nature gets us back in different ways, doesn't she?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

She seems to be increasing her efforts in recent times Jacob. One cannot help but to think back to all the dire warnings over the centuries about fire and brimstone!

[andrew mitchell]

The dam appears above that town Whaley.... rather scary from a helicopter view.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes Whaley Bridge.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words Jacob. I had to research "a sluice-way." I could feel the sadness and regret in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.